By :- Aishwarya Raghunath

“Ardent lovers they were,
Who met to separate…..”

Years ago, before the universe came into form, the Sun & Moon had fallen in love. They loved eachother immensely. Neither was then the Sun so fierce and burning, nor did the moon carry any patch on her. Both in love, lived happily in the paradise of Lord.
But time had something else in its kitty for them. The universe was created, & with it their destiny changed. They had to SEPARATE….
Here goes the speech between them.

Only sometime was left, before the universe was to come into being. Sitting in the garden of Lord, they clasping eachother’s hand. Tears were rolling down their eyes, yet they tried to be strong. Words choked their throat, atlast the Sun spoke on.

Sun : We can’t come together,
it will reason in destruction of world. We have to separate for the betterment of others, we have to part… (throat choked)… away.

Moon : ( with tear filled eyes) I can understand, but I will always wait for you, someday in the horizon we will meet and reminisce back all the memories.
But promise me you will be happy always.

Sun : Will u be happy?
Moon : Yes I will be,Β 
(who had kept her fingers crossed. Praying silently, for this to be a bad dream & hoping it will soon break & everything will turn back the way it was.)

They left eachother’s hand,
Unable to leave,
yet they walked their way to fulfill their duty for the world,
without glimpsing back.

Years later they met on the horizon. Looking at his love,
the Sun calmed his fierceness
who was till then burning with rage.

There was a long silence between them. Atlast, the Moon spoke,

Moon : How are you?
Sun : (trying hard to hide his pain) as fine I was like always.

Nomore could they mouth out words, their hearts were burning with pain of love.

But love overpowered words, in silence they spoke to eachother..

Moon :- (looking with pain & love filled eyes at Sun)

I know you burn because of me
unable to show your pain
You flame fiercely;
spreading light and heat for all around
yet unable to calm the hurt beneath.”

Sun :

I know you have turned cold and pale
without my warmth;
you have frozen away
I can all say looking at your face; looking at the various lovers who taking your name
Your longing for me never faded away;”

Moon :
I know your love is supreme and just
pure as you and it’s you all I trust;
Unable to bear seeing me all cold and low
You pass your warmth on to me, which makes me glow;
Thus, getting your presence felt
I spread light on behalf of you
calm and cool I glow in love of thou;”

“Though I can never see you low
I spread my light onto you;
yet you wane and wax for me
I know it is to show me
you are nothing without me.”

Looking at the pain in their eyes, no more could, God hold back himself. He knew what they had sacrificed for the world,
He came down walking the aisle that day.
I am the reason, you both are away, tell me my child,
I will free you both,
So that forever you can live together.

Sun and Moon : (In unison)
No my Lord, we don’t want the world to destroy for our sake,
Though we are far away, our love will be alive always.
The world, is like our child,
For their good,
We will keep spreading our love always.

“Seeing their selfless love,
he said,
forever in universe,
whenever there is love,
you will be remembered,
thus, looking at your love,
it will forever be immortal.”


Such was the selfless love of theirs. Looking into the eyes of his love,

Once when we come face to face,
I only let you to shadow me and take away all my glow,
for the pain I have given you,
by letting you go.”

Then, proclaimed Lord to the universe, these words:

The world may call it eclipse,
But that is the time,
When two ardent lovers will together meet,
To teach the world,
The power of ETERNAL LOVE

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Posted by Aishwarya Raghunath (mystic raghaash)


Published by: mysticity

Well I am crazy, weird, nothing near to normal. My mind has a mind of its own. I believe in the mystic, because we are all about it. In short I am what I am.. Now what others think of me or perceive me. Hmm... that I don't care about. Living life to the fullest is my funda. There's a simple formula here, Add love minus expectations multiply happiness divide sorrow is equal to content life. Now its enough about me, lets get into the roller coaster ride of mysticity.....

Categories Poetry, Short Story21 Comments

21 thoughts on “THE ETERNAL LOVE STORY!!!”

  1. Ahh would you believe if I say I was thinking about something like this 😦

    Salute to you, feels so happy, almost hugs and kisses in the air.

    I will still bring a new way to say what I am thinking.

    It’s so wonderful to see someone write so intense and profound love feelings.

    You like Math ?

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        Here’s a glimpse of what I was thinking on Light and Dark. I was weaving a story in my mind, but yours is better than I could have come up with. I will ponder further to bring a connection. I have some thoughts, it will take some time to get that flow of Intensity πŸ˜‰

        Math makes you do stuff which people can’t imagine.

        Do you think your Mathematical abilities help you weaving connections in Love, Emotion, Reality ? Like the Eclipse phenomena you just did.


      2. Wow I read it.. its beautiful and deep.
        Yea up to an extend mathematical calculations helps.. but its just when suddenly idea strikes your mind and once you start writing, it just keeps going with the flow and words pour out.
        As I had stated in previous post, heart feels, brain instructs and hand obeys.

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      3. Yes so my idea is ready, waiting for the flow to come so that words to flow out.

        Glad to be in the same boat as you.

        I like the way you put the credits and copyrights. I was a bit disappointed to see you write the story first, I cannot violate the rights now :), but at the same time I am more than happy that we all have a similarity in our hearts to connect, reproduce and talk about Love and Feelings !

        I guess you are my Blogger of the Day πŸ™‚


      4. (*I am sorry for getting so much excited while reading you post, I was not aware of your gender until your comment came up. Apologies for any awkwardness cause in expressing my exhilaration)


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