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By :- Aishwarya Raghunath
Dear,
Today while writing this letter to you,
I just wish there never comes a moment to post it.
Sitting here in my tent,
admist the desert I am writing, what I have longed to tell you, something that is somewhere buried in the hearts of many of us who fight for our countries.
Whenever we receive letter to report for duty,
there inside our heart,
rises a feeling of pride.
A feeling of our mother calling us, to bail her out of the clutches of enemies.
When i was to become a soldier I always thought its the easiest job ever,
to have rifle in your hand & letting us free to show our valour.
But in reality after donning this army uniform,
each time I hold the rifle & shoot a bullet,
I know its not easy,
to see our fellowmen die,
the weight of responsibility for our nation is very high and also the emotions splurging inside, which we can’t let come admist our duties.
Miles away from everybody, while the air there would be carrying the aroma of sweets ,
the air here only carries the stench of blood, of the soldier, who lost his life in the battle field. With time our eyes have also turned just like the desert, barren & tearless, cold eyes pricking us like the thorns of cactus.
When on the battlefield during night time
the air is filled with energies of vigour & strength,
a feeling of do or die.
Theres sounds of bullets & cries, cries of saving our nation’s pride.
And,
Again in the morning, it turns into a crematory, cold & lifeless, where
millions of them are burned alive.
Sometimes when we are sitting idle,
After the war, looking at the lifeless bodies, makes me think, who is the enemy here?
The one facing us in the opposite, is also some nation’s martyr.
Why are we killing one another, without knowing what wrong the other has done?
still the bullets keep soaring as rains, hitting somebody & rupturing their heart.
We are here to fight for our nation, to save our motherland out of trouble,
but sometimes it makes me feel, what have we given her?
bathing her in her childrens’ blood day & night.
The air carries a silent truth,
The soldiers who die in the battlefield,
are not our enemies,
they are martyrs who are fighting for their country.
Everytime when we see our friends die in front of our eyes, watching
the lord of death walking by, remaining oblivious when he will catch whom, we keep fighting for our nation’s pride.
When the soldiers are hit,
the blood oozes out,
but even in pain, we keep fighting off.
At the time of death,
theres left no more regrets, content are the faces,
who gave their lives for country sake.
When killing we are not killing just an enemy soldier,
but somebody’s love, somebody’s son & maybe a sole breadwinner,
But soon it is overtaken by the feeling of emerging victory.
Day & night we pray for peace, praying the Lord, let there come a day,
when instead of holding rifles,
we all come together hold eachother’s hands to celebrate world unity.
Now the siren has gone,
our call has arrived,
the fight has began, I have to report for my duty.
I don’t know what will be the end result of the war,
but I promise my love, either I will return victorious or else u will recieve my sleeping calmly covered in my mother’s arms,
laden in TRICOLOR..
A Nation’s son..
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Posted by Aishwarya Raghunath (mystic raghaash)
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Touching work! It evokes memories of reading my father’s wartime letters to my mother. Cheers. βSteve in Toronto
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I must say that you just wrote down what my inner voice tells me every time when it comes to war and bloodshed, but I have never been able to put it down in words. So I’m grateful to you. Thanks
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Thank you so much. Am glad you could relate to it ππ
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Thank you so much for considering me for the nomination….ππ
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Totally loved this one.
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Thank you so much
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Thank you so much ππ
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Loved it. Thank you for sharing your words!
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Thank you so much… ππ
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Hi, Aishwarya, Nominated you for the Quote Challenge, Sorry Typed your name wrong. π¦
You’re up now π Visit- https://writingstoheaven.wordpress.com/2016/07/27/quote-challenge-day-1/
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Thank you so much.. I would surely try to complete this challenge soon. ππ
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Hi π
Check out what what written about your blog on https://chiquessence.wordpress.com/2016/07/13/my-top-20-wordpress-blog-picks/
Do repost or leave a comment. Thanks.
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Thank you so much….π
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i am a big time admirer of army people.. and totally loved your post!!
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Thank you Divya ππ
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brilliant expression of feelings, impact was great..
well done..
shreyans
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Thank you so much for your kind words. π
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My pleasure…)
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Wow! Really beautiful! Thank you for posting this, I loved reading this. I look forward to reading more from you!
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Thank you so much… ππ
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deep and powerful. a very amazing touch , I love it btw. Just followed. Mind checking out my blog.
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Thank you so much… Will surely check out your blog… π
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Hey Aish, I saw your post on My trending stories, They have asked me to contribute also. I am not very clear on how to start, anyway I have replied to them..Regards
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Congratulations sir. π They would guide you on how to get about with the site. I can totally understand your dilemma. Even I was confused as to what to post so started with one of my blog posts itself. Still confused regarding what to post next.
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Thanks for the tip Aishwarya
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Welcome sir…
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Hi Mysticity. Great post and beautiful writing in a spirit that is so much needed by this world. I also want to say thanks for all the likes you have given to my paintings. Right after I post it I see a like, always by you, dont know how you do it so quick! Anyway, thanks and take care.
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Welcome… your paintings are amazing
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You are an excellent and thoughtful writer. This post is very thought provoking on a lot of different levels. I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Thank you so much for your genuine words.. π
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A very powerful and moving poem, with some stunning use of imagery, and a real thoughtfulness and balance leaving the reader with some work to do to figure out the thoughts/opinions of their own heart. Harula x
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Thank you so much Harula. I am glad you liked it and could connect to it. Thanks for stopping by my blog ππ
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This! The part that kept me hooked was where you said about killing a fellow human without no reason to do so. Thinking from an individual point of view, it is more than true. A few set of men unknown to another few set of men kill each other for an entirely different group of men. But why?
Well penned π
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The day we start valuing each and every life on earth the world will turn into the most perfect place to live in. I hope the day comes soon.
Thanks for liking my post. π
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Thank you for liking my blog. This is so beautifully written!! I can feel the emotion it was written with.
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Thank you so much ….π
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Beautifully written! Loved it, girl β€
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Thank you so much.. π
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Beautiful write up
Loved every bit of it
Your ideas match mines
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Thank you so much…. π
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nice to meet u
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Same here..
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Love your style. Looking forward to reading more.
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Thank you so much.. π
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My husband is in the army… this resonated with me as someone who could very well be on the receiving end of this letter in the future. β€
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I am happy you could resonate with what I wrote. I am glad i could do justice to what I wrote. Thanks for visiting my blog… π
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This actually resonated with me, have been there and done it,funny anectode fwhen I was going to be deployed to Afghnistan, sorry I meant Afganshit, my mother when I talked with her on the pone ( I can remember this as if it was yesterday) so my mom through the phone said, ” Just bring me back sand”, gotta love the woman.
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I am glad you could connect to what I wrote. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
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Forget about soldiers, did you really write the first part for me?…… I know you did, that was seeeeeeeeeeeeexy, but donΒ΄t write it in a tent in the middle of the deasert, itΒ΄s hot, woman!
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Haha. .. that was a good one. I would have loved to write it admist snow, but then the hands would turn too numb to writeπ. So opted to write in a tent in middle of desert. π
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yo weird giiiiiirl…………!
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Forgot.
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No, I winked first
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Haha… No, its always Ladies first. π
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I always open the door for the lady. IΒ΄m a God given gentleman
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My friend Laurie shared your blog with me and I LOVE what I find here. Wow. You have a new follower. π
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I am elated you liked what I wrote… thanks for the follow.. π happy blogging
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The air caries the silent truth ~ I think this was the phrase that said it all. For those who are facing you on the other side of the border, and also for those who are waiting for the soldier at his home. And in between the both, in silence, in solemn ~the soldier carries out his job.
Well composed writeup ~ heartfelt words.
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Thank you so much Nitin. I am glad you liked it & feel the connect with the words. π
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This is beautiful. A lot of emotions conveyed in one single write up.
The undertone to the entire letter is painful, but in a way beautiful as it brings to us the bittersweet emotions related to soldiers and warrior families.
Beautifully written. Would come back for more.
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Thank you so much for liking. This is something I feel every soldier goes through. I just tried my best to pen them down here.
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You have done that in the most beautiful way possible . π
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Thanks π
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A beautiful tribute to the courage and sacrifice of the soldiers.
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Thank you…
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Great article…..captivating, as mentioned in of the earlier comments…
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Thank you so much… Glad you liked it.. π
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Heartbreaking. My father, who I never knew, was killed in WWII
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Salute to the ones who unconditionally serve for their country. Salute to their valour and courage.
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Beautiful writing, being a former soldier myself, i did like that part. Glad you stumbled by my blog.
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Thank you… Glad you liked it. π
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Reblogged this on sarahondesertsand.
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Do you mind if I reblog this?
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Surely you can reblog…
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I love this.
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Thank you Rachel..
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Oh I reeeally liked this!
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Thank you so much..
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Great Post
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Thank you π π
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welcome
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Wow! Very captivating and thought-provoking!
If you’re interested, do check out my stories too! π
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Thank you Faristha. I would surely check out your blog. π
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Please feel free to check out my other write-ups too. π
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Profound and poignant. Beautifully written. my father and my first husband fought in two different wars; World War II and Vietnam. Thank you for sharing this incredible letter.
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